五年級(jí)英語(yǔ)作文及點(diǎn)評(píng)：My Days of the week

 　　My Days of the week

　　I’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o’clock every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’clock. I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I don’t have to go to school on school, and I like to go swimming on that day.

　　【要領(lǐng)點(diǎn)評(píng)】

　　這篇作文的題目是“我的一周”，小作者沒(méi)有說(shuō)一些空話(huà)，而是從自己的親身經(jīng)歷寫(xiě)起，敘述了自己一周七天的所作所為，并特別強(qiáng)調(diào)了星期天的喜好，寫(xiě)得自然、流暢。

　　小朋友們寫(xiě)作文時(shí)要注意人稱(chēng)及謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的變化，要依據(jù)提示，結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際，寫(xiě)自己身邊熟悉的事情。